This is my conclusion in my exposition.
Taylor Swift and Edmund Hillary are both pretty great. In my opinion, Edmund Hillary is better. He is more than a mountaineer and is really kind hearted in all the things he has done. Edmund has been a great leader by helping other people and is a phenomenal mountaineer. What he has done is amazing. People wouldn't be there without him. He has inspired me a lot to keep trying no matter what and to never give up (Resilience). I state my opinion, Sir Edmund is better for the many reasons i have above.
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