Monday, 11 April 2016

My Exposition

WALT: Follow the writing process to write an exposition.
This is my conclusion in my exposition.

Taylor Swift and Edmund Hillary are both pretty great. In my opinion, Edmund Hillary is better. He is more than a mountaineer and is really kind hearted in all the things he has done. Edmund has been a great leader by helping other people and is a phenomenal mountaineerWhat he has done is amazing. People wouldn't be there without him. He has inspired me a lot to keep trying no matter what and to never give up (Resilience). I state my opinion, Sir Edmund is better for the many reasons i have above.

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